Business whether big or small is to maximize profit. Do you agree with that? Give your opinion.
With the defeat of communism and victory of capitalism, entrepreneurship has significantly increased over the years. Majority people believe that the purpose of any kind business is to get as much profit as possible while some do not agree . This essay will discuss that the prime objective of any business is to earn money.
To begin with, with the passage of time people are interested to earn enough money to fulfill their world desires. Because of globalisation now people have access to many things and are they are in pursuit to live a luxurious life which requires. For instance, America has launched an investment scheme in which people can get America green card if they invest more than 500,000 dollars in real estate. Therefore, people want to earn a large amount of money to avail such opportunities and that money can come by either corruption or getting enough profit from their businesses.
At the same time, world has become an expensive place to live on. Thesedays everybody have too much bills to pay while having limited money which forces them to get maximum profit from their businesses. For instance, the food quality of Savour Foods, a very famous restaurant has become average as everything have become expensive and customers are reluctant to pay more money for the same food. In that case, they have lowered their quality of food in order to get same amount of profit.
In conclusion, financial burden have forced people to earn more money as burden is increased on people which may be because of desire to live a luxurious life or to get even basic necessities of life in some cases. In my opinion, the main purpose of business is to earn more money.
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Suggestion: many
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...asic necessities of life in some cases. In my opinion, the main purpose of busines...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8339100346 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56127058615 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525951557093 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.793279293 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.461538462 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0912933456296 0.242375264174 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424501236539 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489103101069 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676615504471 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525798241505 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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