You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
You should write at least 250 words.
In this era of modernization, one can easily access food from any part of the world. Although some people argue that local food is better in terms of economic viability and environmentally it is debatable. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages, why it’s best to eat home land food.
Consuming the food sourced from the same place is not only healthy but also benefiting local communities. Vegetables, Fruits and other necessary ingredients required for the food making sourced from a nearby place are not only fresh, but free from chemicals where there is no need for preserving these items. These items are not only cheap, but also helps the local farmers, shopkeepers and many other workers relying on this.Research from Harvard mentioned an experiment done on a rural town in USA where people used ingredients made from the same place found that costs of the overall food making is down by 25% and is 30% healthier than outsourced food which has preservatives and other chemicals.
Shipped food in the longer run has detrimental effects on health and environment. As these foods are to be transported from one place to another which involves many days of transit ,companies are bound to add chemicals for longevity and bear the costs involved in the refrigeration, fuel and taxes to deliver. This makes the food costlier, often unhealthy and damaging the climate. For instance, a study carried out in people who regularly had taken foods from far away are 25% more risk to fatal diseases than the one who have taken food from local sources.
To conclude, one can get any kind of food he desires from any corner but must be aware of the consequences also. This essay discussed why home grown food is not only healthy but also sustainable way for the mother earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Research
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ther which involves many days of transit ,companies are bound to add chemicals for...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91447368421 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69791393714 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.4722178117 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223820006707 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976012489718 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379697965019 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148817559849 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545638788628 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.