You are going on a short training course at a college in New Zealand. You need somewhere to live while you are there.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter,
-- explain your situation
-- describe the accommodation you require
-- say when you will need it
Dear Sir/Madam,
I had enrolled for a crash course at a university in your nation, hence, I request the housing director to arrange a living courter during my stay.
Currently, I am working as an executive manager in Scotland, my organization has asked me to undergo a six weeks training session in your esteemed institution, whereas, I do not have any friends or families over there to support me.
I prefer my residential home to be near to my educational academy, apart from that I expect it to be fully furnished and to have basic facilities such as a single bedroom, free internet connection, attached bathroom, kitchen and a balcony.
I will be arriving there on 22nd June 2020 at around six in the evening; therefore, I wish that everything will be arranged as I mentioned earlier, thus, I can start to live there without any hesitance.
I would be grateful to you if you could help me in my hour of need. Thereby, please help me out with accepting my request to provide a boarding house.
Your’s Faithfully,
Elizabeth Manickam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I had enrolled for a crash course at a u...
^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...to live there without any hesitance. I would be grateful to you if you could h...
^
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: YOUR_S[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Your' or 'Yours'?
Suggestion: Your; Yours
...request to provide a boarding house. Your’s Faithfully, Elizabeth Manickam.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, therefore, thus, whereas, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8453038674 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90540504376 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690607734807 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.5085029288 44.8134815571 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.285714286 76.5299724578 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 16.8248392259 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12956646666 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662648079876 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067583322807 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715708368235 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472467328707 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 8.62886597938 226% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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