research are into new types of treatment and medicines to improve health and deal with disease.who do you think is should funding from,government,private company or individual
Research are continuing to discover the new ways of treatments and medicines for promotion of health and fighting against diseases. I believe, it is the cumulative responsibility of government ,private companies as well as individual to provide funds for such researches and developments.
To embark on, government has major participation in this. Firstly , the various medical institutions and hospitals in the country are being run by authorities .So , applying good techniques and treatments are the ways to tackle the diseases and improve the patient’s condition and it is merely possible by promoting research in medical sector. Secondly , government is responsible for safety and health of every person of the country. If the citizens will not get healthy, then it will produce burden on the economy of country, moreover they will no longer be able to attend jobs due to health related issues and this leads to halt the progress of nation . For these reasons, funding by governments sources is utmost important.
Likewise government, private companies should be responsible for the health of employees working in their organization. During any health crises, when there are high demand of money for curing the situation , then firm can provide funds for continuing the proper treatment. However , money from the pockets of individuals while treating their diseses in both private as well as government hospitals is a mean of generating funds . Ultimately massive demands in medical field related to treatment and prevention of disease arise the need of more research for inventing the new and easy techniques to deal with health issues.
To conclude,it is clear that authorities,citizens and also private companies are sources of providing funds for the intiation of medical research in order to find more conventional ways to improve health and handle the severe diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39455782313 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06588542275 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9512675177 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.166666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311976857129 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11679199982 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576951023932 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202164115834 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674247406294 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
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Research are continuing to discover the new ways...
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...seases. I believe, it is the cumulative responsibility of government ,private co...
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...ual to provide funds for such researches and developments. To embark on, governm...
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...nt’s condition and it is merely possible by promoting research in medical sector....
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...ng research in medical sector. Secondly , government is responsible for safety an...
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...his leads to halt the progress of nation . For these reasons, funding by governmen...
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...vernments sources is utmost important. Likewise government, private companies should be...
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... organization. During any health crises, when there are high demand of money for ...
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...demand of money for curing the situation , then firm can provide funds for contin...
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...mand of money for curing the situation , then firm can provide funds for continui...
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...irm can provide funds for continuing the proper treatment. However , money from ...
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... treating their diseses in both private as well as government hospitals is a mean of gener...
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...d of more research for inventing the new and easy techniques to deal with health ...
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...to deal with health issues. To conclude,it is clear that authorities,citizens and ...
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... for the intiation of medical research in order to find more conventional ways ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39455782313 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06588542275 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9512675177 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.166666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311976857129 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11679199982 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576951023932 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202164115834 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674247406294 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.