Many people believe that modern technology has made people more sociable, while others think that it has isolated them. Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion.
In the 3 decades, if one has to list the most significant technological breakthrough so far, they will certainly name the internet in most of the cases. Numerous people believe that with the advent of social networking sites people have become more social compared to the previous generations while others disagree. This essay will talk about both the views and will argue why these websites, as well as apps, have made the millennials less social.
Certainly, advances in the telecommunication sector have brought people closer than ever before. Whereas in the past, one can only meet other individuals in a club, park or a party, these days, a person can talk with an individual from another state that too while sitting in their home. This convenience has created a conducive environment to increase social interactions on a daily basis by eliminating geographical barrier. As a consequence, people are interacting more or in other words, they have become more social. Facebook, Tinder and Snapchat, for instance, enables anyone to chat and be friends with others at the touch of a button. Therefore, people think that modern technology has made individuals more sociable.
However, others, including myself, believe that technological advancements have worsened people’s interpersonal skills. The reason is simple to understand, nowadays, the millennials are trapped in the cyberspace where they only meet a person based on profile matches and their similarities. Such websites and apps make people less tolerable about others’ views and would only make connections with others who have the same beliefs or hobbies. If a person is reluctant to meet someone with different ideology or skills how one can say technology is ameliorating social skills of the society. To cite an example, users of social apps create groups where only like-minded individuals are invited which is certainly not going to increase anyone’s tolerance level or amicability.
To conclude, technology is making people less social by turning them into bigots.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, for instance, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37267080745 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95468129991 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580745341615 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2556402493 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230626568407 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899057622167 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933850443218 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153813106076 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375261286627 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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