In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Humans in 21th century are more dependent on technology, for instance, cars, than ever. Cars have been increasing, since it was invented, but some believe that there will be fewer cars in twenty years. I do not agree with this idea due to the fact that population of world is increasing, people are moving to urban areas to find better financial opportunities, and our time is becoming more valuable.
The first point I want to discuss is population. While we have to look at this problem as a local problem, if we look at generally, we will see that the population of the world is increasing, mainly because of the governments which do not have regulations over the birth rates. Therefore, also the number of cars is increasing.
Secondly, I want to mention people who are migrating from rural areas. Because cities are huge source of money, there are a lot of people who wants to live in cities. But it also creates another problem: fast transportation. While you can walk to everywhere in villages, people extremely need cars to get somewhere quickly, which lowers the price of the cars due to high demand. This makes cars affordable which causes also increase in number of cars.
The final point is our time. Nowadays people are rushing to almost everywhere, that is why time is becoming more precious than that of few decades ago. For instance, if use car to go home from my workplace, I will have more time to rest and maybe work. Another example, once I had to meet with my friends, and decided to get meeting place by foot, but unfortunately, I had forgotten that I had to meet. First, I thought that I did not have enough time to prepare, but, instead, I came up with this idea: going there with car. I spent almost all of the time required to go to there by foot to prepare.
To sum up, I have to mention that it is very problematic issue, therefore governments should consider this. There may be a lot of resolutions for this. For instance, Luxembourg made public transportation free, which, I think, will significantly decrease the number of cars in use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 542, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...a: going there with car. I spent almost all of the time required to go to there by foot to...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65489130435 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68948579205 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540760869565 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6046193544 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.65 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18992431758 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541189070894 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078189920962 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105085041877 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560086403538 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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