everybody should be allowed admission to university study program regardless of their level of academic ability to what extend do you agree or disagree with the statement
Gone are the days when competition academic lines were not higher and it was easy to take admission in universities however this attitude has undergone since the modernization took place a first school of thought enrollment is an academic university should be for all students with the without merit based while other seems differently .I demure statement .this is a shell elucidate the reason behind my opinion and ensuing figments .
First and foremost the reason why the university should take admission on the basis of merit list the students who are eligible only those can take admissions to the university to be more precise if the students have not ability to become a doctor then how can they do study in medical field.for example in one bollywood movie munna bhai mbbs is a great example for the scenario who get a degree of mbbs he was not able to treatment the patient hence the demission should be on interest and capability of the student's secondly university campus always have limited seats so it is not possible to enrolled many students .
However ,it might difficult for those students they may not get a good marks for some reason like physical illness and any other reason so they might be felt unworthy neither the less the merit and and fear of higher percentage forget academic admission in universities always make the students strong in study they does hard work in school to take admission in university owing to this there a lot of hard work has work be behind their admission there's this spirit make them more hard worker which always always helpful for their university study and the universities always need these type of dedicated dedicated students which always did hard work .
To recapitulate ,although studies should be for all get admission in university should be based on merit where as the hard worker and intelligent students give best in the academic and give the services to the holistic growth of the country as well as their own life .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85798816568 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55236864196 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502958579882 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 84.0 20.2975951904 414% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.527505642 49.4020404114 313% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 410.5 106.682146367 385% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 84.5 20.7667163134 407% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.0 7.06120827912 340% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224972235784 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155081461918 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0253861662389 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155081461918 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253861662389 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.7 13.0946893788 334% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -13.78 50.2224549098 -27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.0 11.3001002004 319% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.6 10.1190380762 352% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 36.0 10.7795591182 334% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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