Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The speaker asserts that colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country. I partially agree with her. In this competitive world to keep pace with this, it is must that students should aware of how the other are doing with their studies too. because by keeping themselves only within the four walls of their classsroom, they can never visualize the outer world.
First of all, throughout the world students are not under the same carriculam. some countries folllow a certain type of method, a definite type of grading system whether some follow a different way.it's upto the country from where they belong to. Legislators make these rules and undoubtedly these will vary. After a certain period, these students will persue jobs and now because of communication and technology, world is becoming a global village. they will enter in job fields and then they will apply their required knowledge. In orderto keep pace with the rest, they must broaden their outknowledge. this includes getting familiar with the rest of the world.For this reason, I think this a beneficial way for students to visit a foreign country in one semester. By visiting not only they can gather knowledge but also mixing with different people,they will be exposed to a new culture. this will render them to broader their outlook. people can give up prejudice by mixing with other people and they will understand that being dogmatic only narrow the mind and nothing else.
However, it is not that much easy for administrations that they can take all their students in a foreign country for study.There may be financial constraints that may not be posssible for underdeveloped o0r developing countries. Moreover, it is difficult to manage a huge number of students for the teachers in a different countries. Again, foreign countries at the same time have to have the capacity to accomodate the students and teachers with the facilities too. So, I think to accomplish this is a little bit difficult. but, what I think if it's not possible to provide this much facilities, teachers should make students familiar with thye carriculam of the foreign countries and syllabus must be upgraded. Still, there are countries that follow backdated syllabus.
In sum, the idea is must be taken into consideration. but if it's not possible to implement ,teachers and students must think for alternartives
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, then, at least, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 400.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1175 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76209951848 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.1619072818 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0454545455 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226735615126 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710963469877 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846621296083 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149137200587 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894521326034 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.