Some working parents think childcare centre can provide their children best care, while others think family members such as grandma will be experienced and can give children best care. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
The child-raising has been a controversial issue in the modern society.Although there are some arguments in favor of relative care, I would rather give preference to childcare centre.
Advocates of relative care believe that this one-on-one care provide a safe and comfortable environment for children to relax.Children will possibly have a sense of isolation once being away from relatives since young children tend to express intimacy to those they trust and are familiar with.And more importantly, young children have difficulty in expressing what they need, but grandparents can precisely capture the slight feelings of children and offer persistent and considerate care.Another benefit of this is that it can reduce economic burden imposed on average dual-income family as having grandparents to be the caretaker is normally free of charge.As a result, family could save more deposit and use it for other purpose.
Whereas, on the flip side, some people hold the belief that childcare center can assume the role of caregiver.The major reason for this is that childcare center can provide more professional service, guaranteeing both physical and mental health of children.Majority of nursery homes are inspected for being licensing purpose so security is not an issue parents need to worry about.Furthermore, by playing with peers, children can learn how to deal with others and improve their social skills which is better compared to the one-to-one counterpart.In comparison, if children were taken care of by grandparents, kids would likely to be spoilt.
To encapsulate, I do accept the advantages of having grandparents as tender, but childcare center is a better place where they can acquire the capability of socialism and learn how to well-behaved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well, whereas, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49084249084 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24192586641 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626373626374 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 250.668605932 49.4020404114 507% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 374.75 106.682146367 351% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.25 20.7667163134 329% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277025547141 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144474268129 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717381989209 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144474268129 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717381989209 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.6 13.0946893788 295% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -14.47 50.2224549098 -29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 11.3001002004 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.75 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.41 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 33.0 10.7795591182 306% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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