ou recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should:
explain what you like about his new house
tell what you enjoyed most during your staying
suggest when and where you could meet next time with her/him.
Dear Pardeep,
I hope you are in radiant health. A visit to your new furbished house a couple of days ago was worth visiting. I really felt overwhelmed by the huge welcome at your house.
Initially, the statute of the tiger at the entrance of your house is appealling. I think anyone could become huge fan of that still. Also, the L shaped sofa imported from Singapore is worth of the price. I wish I could also buy the same piece.
Additionally, I adored when we both baked cookies. That was really experiencing moment. Besides this, it was entertaining cleaning up the mess that we have made while baking simultaneously, listening to loud music and dancing. It has reminded me of my old days when I have started to cook.
Lastly, next time give me a chance to welcome you at our favorite cafe in downtown. Yes, we will have a great time over there also. So book the date of 3rd August on my birthday.
Best regards,
Sarab.
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| 2020-07-05 | Sarab.rathor4@gmail.com | 47 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oment. Besides this, it was entertaining cleaning up the mess that we have made w...
^^
Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...music and dancing. It has reminded me of my old days when I have started to cook....
^^
Line 9, column 127, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...s, we will have a great time over there also. So book the date of 3rd August on my b...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, lastly, really, so, still, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60946745562 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59689844175 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686390532544 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5276375796 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.9333333333 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.2666666667 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159437724145 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445707345615 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539433510508 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979930589201 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797042248032 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.27 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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