Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The question is whether people are less happy now than people who lived in past. As a matter of fact, the expectations of individuals have altered dramatically during recent decades. The industrial revolution had influences not only on our physical life but also on our intellectual life. Today, people are less satisfied with their lives as the result of fast changing world. They compare their life continuously with other persons' life; in addition, they fail to achieve the goals they had specified. These concepts are well illustrated bellow.
As a threshold matter, the new communication systems and social media, has changed the style of lives. People have connections with whose distance is both remote and adjacent to their dwellings. Such communications enhance people's information about each detail in terms of job, income, relationships, etc. What makes people less happy and less satisfy is the comparison they make between their life and others in such environment. For instance, couples who compare their life with their friends for the travels they make shall be always unsatisfied since they cannot make as many travels as their friends do account for their abundant bank account.
Furthermore, following their goals, those people have been distracted by tremendous evolution in all aspects of current life. While an individual is trying his best in a planned route, new challenges stemming from the simultaneous incidents turn him disappointed. Even the most accurate anticipations cannot withstand the events occur for the imposed plans. It is dismal that fills the mind of whose plans are ruined.
As a conclusion, the fast changing world has influenced people in terms of happiness and satisfaction. Comparison and failure are the two main reasons contributing for this unpleasant feeling in people. To overcome such thoughts, people should behave more spiritually and deny physical failures they encounter in their life.
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- TPO 24 Integrated Writing Task 45
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- TPO 40 Some parent offer their school age children money for each high grade mark they get in school Do you think this is a good idea Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- TPO 54 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state sponsored Olympic teams Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...re less happy now than people who lived in past. As a matter of fact, the expectations ...
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Line 1, column 427, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...pare their life continuously with other persons life; in addition, they fail to achieve...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38360655738 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84578831836 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626229508197 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1786007484 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275028921256 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907711490749 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114198224136 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159235592638 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777749707056 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.