Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and has asked for suggestions as to how it should be celebrated.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Thank your friend for inviting you to the party and say that you have some ideas about how to celebrate it.
Suggest what type of party your friend could have
Suggest a good place to hold the party
Dear Mali,
I am writing to congratulate you in advance as you celebrate your birthday in a fortnight and want to recommend some things for the celebration.
I sincerely appreciate you for giving me the honour to grace this occasion and I really can't wait to attend this great feast as you will be stepping in style into the third decade of your existence on this world.
It's my opinion that we should have a pool and masked party, remeber how the my last party went down, this time, we would also improve it by adding a buffet and a barbecue. You friends would really love it.
You recall the new hotel in town? It's a well lit location and because of the cool spot for barbecue it provides, it's a perfect place for such event as it is also accessible from the train station.
I can't wait for the day, my dancing shoes are set.
Your friend
Ojimson
Words: 159
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mali, I am writing to congratulate you in adva...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ommend some things for the celebration. I sincerely appreciate you for giving me...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...our to grace this occasion and I really cant wait to attend this great feast as you ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...de of your existence on this world. Its my opinion that we should have a pool a...
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Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...ve a pool and masked party, remeber how the my last party went down, this time, we wou...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'You' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'friend'
Suggestion: friend
... by adding a buffet and a barbecue. You friends would really love it. You recall th...
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Line 9, column 35, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
.... You recall the new hotel in town? Its a well lit location and because of the ...
^^^
Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...the cool spot for barbecue it provides, its a perfect place for such event as it is...
^^^
Line 10, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...o accessible from the train station. I cant wait for the day, my dancing shoes are ...
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Line 12, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y dancing shoes are set. Your friend Ojimson Words: 159
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Line 13, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...shoes are set. Your friend Ojimson Words: 159
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, so, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47826086957 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30862137415 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664596273292 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7919486947 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.125 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310424874814 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130344952808 0.0766984524023 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864871701254 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135533605225 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897348231531 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.