Nowadays in many countries woman have full time jobs. Therefore, it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays human life is very busy to built own future specially woman. woman is in the job, she takes lot of hardworking for make our carrier, In addition that few year ratio says an ever-increasing number of woman's work full time. In this occasion she do not give more time in household tasks. I strongly agree with the statement.
Firstly, man and women are sharing between all the housework to promote to gender equality. All the women whole day work makes woman tired and physically weak.They have to work on house.Therefore, it is necessary to reduce their burden by helping in their work. Working woman if they have a child so they create many responsibility to them. In modern society, own century and culture was changed men do not going for a job at this time woman can go to a job. In the house men's income can not meet the requirement also woman income include that all the requirement can be met.
Secondly, the woman share household task to husband for checked how much he loves her. Sharing household task is a way to show our love and care beloved family. women and mother are not similar with housework. It is justifiable to argue that men and women should share housework equally. Woman are also take care of her own children and she is working in household task so she comes to see her baby time to time.
In conclusion, cause of stress and physically health, all the men are helping to woman for own household tasks. Nowadays, each member of the family should take part in doing housework. it is responsible both genders to share housework.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Woman
...sy to built own future specially woman. woman is in the job, she takes lot of hardwor...
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Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...n ever-increasing number of womans work full time. In this occasion she do not give more ...
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Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...ns work full time. In this occasion she do not give more time in household tasks. ...
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Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lity. All the women whole day work makes woman tired and physically weak.They hav...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
... makes woman tired and physically weak.They have to work on house.Therefore, it is ...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...sically weak.They have to work on house.Therefore, it is necessary to reduce their burden...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun responsibility seems to be countable; consider using: 'many responsibilities'.
Suggestion: many responsibilities
...man if they have a child so they create many responsibility to them. In modern society, own century...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e that all the requirement can be met. Secondly, the woman share household task...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Women
... show our love and care beloved family. women and mother are not similar with housewo...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...share housework equally. Woman are also take care of her own children and she is wo...
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Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ork equally. Woman are also take care of her own children and she is working in h...
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Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ly should take part in doing housework. it is responsible both genders to share ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64028776978 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5718996827 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557553956835 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6316179349 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8823529412 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317737390477 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101840600031 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429189034826 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183784307394 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503960254275 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.