agree or disagree with young people enjoy life more than older people do

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...py and satisfied with what you are doing , many people propose that young people u...
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...lly enjoy life more than older people do .I think that an individual can’t enjoy l...
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...y enjoy life more than older people do .I think that an individual can’t enjoy li...
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...uirement of happiness as health, passion , excitement .In other words, I do agree ...
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...appiness as health, passion , excitement .In other words, I do agree with the prop...
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...piness as health, passion , excitement .In other words, I do agree with the propos...
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... happiness is related somehow to age. first,I think that health and fitness are tw...
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...iness is related somehow to age. first,I think that health and fitness are two ...
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...ted somehow to age. first,I think that health and fitness are two important fea...
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...wo important features to enjoy your life .A disease could be barrier that hinders...
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... important features to enjoy your life .A disease could be barrier that hinders ...
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...ur life .A disease could be barrier that hinders individual ‘s activity .Old peop...
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...ier that hinders individual ‘s activity .Old people usually suffer from diseases ...
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...r that hinders individual ‘s activity .Old people usually suffer from diseases suc...
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...y suffer from diseases such as Alzheimer , diabetes and others, this will affect ...
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...iseases such as Alzheimer , diabetes and others, this will affect their fitness a...
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...e able to workout or go skiing or hiking , because these activities may expose the...
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...ctivities may expose them to real danger .In addition to that a disease may reduce...
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...ivities may expose them to real danger .In addition to that a disease may reduce s...
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Line 3, column 454, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... reduce some ones excitement and passion .But it is all about health issues? Ther...
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...educe some ones excitement and passion .But it is all about health issues? There a...
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...sons why age could affect life enjoyment , such as loss of ability to adapt with t...
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...th the modern life and latest technology .young people owns a perfect memory and m...
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... memory and maximum activity of thinking ,but getting older will reduce brain’s ac...
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...duce brain’s activity and this is normal .Old people are unable to adapt with new ...
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...ce brain’s activity and this is normal .Old people are unable to adapt with new tec...
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... are unable to adapt with new technology ,so they are going to miss many things th...
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...to navigate through google the right way ,or they may miss an important event that...
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...t happened but they didn’t know about it ,only because they domt know how to use t...
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...y domt know how to use their TV, phones .. .old people are still connected with th...
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...omt know how to use their TV, phones .. .old people are still connected with the ...
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...still connected with the old habits and past memories . so its not only about the brain activ...
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...ed with the old habits and past memories . so its not only about the brain activit...
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...with the old habits and past memories . so its not only about the brain activity b...
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...vents them to learn and adapt new things , maybe they feel better with the things ...
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...r with the things they have been used on . Moreover ,young people like to be ris...
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...hings they have been used on . Moreover ,young people like to be risky and brave...
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...ings they have been used on . Moreover ,young people like to be risky and brave ...
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...,young people like to be risky and brave , their ideas are unlimited ,however olde...
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...ky and brave , their ideas are unlimited ,however older people got old most ofthem...
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...ofthem are caution and like to stay safe .this inturn will affect their deciions a...
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... enjoyment needs a brave risky idea that donot have any limitations , as swimming...
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...ky idea that donot have any limitations , as swimming in the mid of night ,dancin...
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...ations , as swimming in the mid of night ,dancing without stop….. As a conclusion...
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... the mid of night ,dancing without stop….. As a conclusion ,life is experienced o...
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...dancing without stop….. As a conclusion ,life is experienced once ,and says passe...
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...s a conclusion ,life is experienced once ,and says passes fast , so every one will...
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...s experienced once ,and says passes fast , so every one will get his turn old peop...
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... allowing other young to live their life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2032.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79245283019 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19845880319 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549528301887 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.1344086022 298% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 185.931411536 48.9658058833 380% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 290.285714286 100.406767564 289% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.5714285714 20.6045352989 294% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.5714285714 5.45110844103 304% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 49.0 5.5376344086 885% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380754112942 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187280549542 0.076458572812 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159557807733 0.0737576698707 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226772570438 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163091479327 0.0645574589148 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.4 11.7677419355 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.04 58.1214874552 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 10.1575268817 251% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.39 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.0537634409 259% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.247311828 254% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.