it is much more convenient to watch a movie on television or computer then by a cricket ticket or go to cinema and the nearest future the popularity of cinema will drastically declined do you agree or disagree .
Gone are the days when people had only source of cinema for entertainment.However,this attitude has undergone a sea change ever since the technology took place.Nowadays masses give preference to watch movie on television or computer rather than cinema.Some people adhere that in coming epoch the popularity of cinema will go down.I endorse the statement.This essay shall elucidate the reasons of theater's fall in the ensuing fragment.
First and foremost, reason why the cinema are being vastly dominated by television and computer is that traditional entertainment type is becoming outdated and the inconvenient.In these days of technology advancement people seems more convenient source of entertainment after long hours work or study.Thus going to cinema seems not provide to their requirement where as they can easily watch Television and computer art their comfortable place.Secondly nowadays large LCDs screens are easily available in every street on corner.Which gave same audio and video clearity as like cinema screen.Consequently Masses can enjoy movies at home as like theatre.By this i mean they can save their time wisely as well as their traveling expenditures and dress up charges.In this case' they do not need to wait in a long queues for ticket hence Television and computer are more preferable and cheap rather than cinema .
However, cinema's large screen and high quality voice always fascinate the audience and give extreme enjoyment.Which might not be possible via other mode of technology.Not only this, 3D screen always attract the audience but also gave chance for outing which is necessary for human growth and entertainment.Nevertheless in this era audience have sufficient source of enjoyment rather than watch cinema like go out of station and due to hectic schedule everyone want to invest their quality of time with their family while watching television and playing games on computer.Which might be the reason reduced their interest in cinema .
To recapitulate,although cinema had indispensable part of people's life yet changing this epoch,it place is taking television and computer with their great feature as well as it needs of the modern mankind lives.Which provide them the comfortable life as well as the great source of entertainment .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, i mean, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46306818182 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44338516702 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585227272727 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 88.0 20.2975951904 434% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 230.164479232 49.4020404114 466% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 480.75 106.682146367 451% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 88.0 20.7667163134 424% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 31.25 7.06120827912 443% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236110176715 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144074825669 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060012325619 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144074825669 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060012325619 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.3 13.0946893788 369% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -26.3 50.2224549098 -52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.8 11.3001002004 343% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.57 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.86 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 9.78957915832 337% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.2 10.1190380762 368% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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