Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc.to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It universally accepted that both practical and theoretical knowledge are equally important in young peoples life. The universities are essential way for the theoretical education then again universities cant compete companies in the practical education. The essay discusses both views in deep.
Nowadays, the ratio of education has increased gradually and every year new universities and new education programs are opened to satisfy the need of higher education. the universities help young students to master in respected fields and fill in with what has already been invented. Moreover, theoretical education is essential especially for the students who are more interested in mathematics and theories than innovative products or gadgets.
On the other side of the coin, working as a mechanic or factory engineer is the best ways to improve the knowledge in specific fields. The universities can provide new ideas but companies help to implement them. One will never know the mistake happened while designing the product in closed room until the product is manufactured in the factories. In addition, most of the companies offers part-time internships to final year graduation students in their companies to prepare the for the work-flow.
In my opinion, young generation should be motivated for the more practical education than the theoretical but that doesn't agree with the disappearance of the universities. Computer simulation, midway between universities and companies, must be accounted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, then, while, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63876651982 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08547463121 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5859030837 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7523296791 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191997699826 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687522954836 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424604478526 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114321712117 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415822821554 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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