Some people say that educational success depends most of the time on having a good teacher. Others says attitude of students also matters? Discuss and give your opinion.
Indubitably, in this contemporary era, education is of paramount significance in life of individuals. However, there are predominantly two contrasting views where one section of society vehemently deems that an efficient teacher act as a significant factor in success of a student while other emphasize that learner's own perspective towards studies play a relevant role.
Apparently, the prominent factors that trigger the view point of a section of people who advocate that a tutor plays an indispensable role in success of a student and have reasons to substantiate it. First and foremost, although learning capabilities differ int every student, teachers are the guides to help them embrace the things in a right way. Seemingly, in the formative stage of a child teacher act as key influencing factor in making concepts clear and understandable. Secondly, despite a teacher imparts academic education, he is also responsible for holistic development of a child which substantially contribute to a successful career. To corroborate, many moral and ethical traits are taught to students along with their curriculum so that learners can reap the benefit of better future prospects. Thirdly, is education possible without a teacher? Certainly No! A teacher is a vital element of educational phenomenon as it act as a mediator in easily comprehending the concepts to students. Henceforth, supervisors are held liable for the performance of a child as they foster the students with skills of education.
On the other hand, some believe that a student's own attitude towards studies is of great importance for attaining success. Chiefly, eventhough the schools are providing the best tutors, is a student lacks sincerity he or she can confront the potential problem of low academic performance. Subsequently, if students are themselves motivated and have sheer determination they can achieve any goal of their lives. According to BBC, a recent study on public schools revealed that besides inefficient faculty, 70% of students out shined in their results being their own hard work and mindset as a prime reason. Moreover, in this ultra modern epoch, pupils not only depend on teachers for information but they equip themselves with abundant knowledge from internet. Consequently, the interest of child to acquire new things act as a important element in prolific increase of their know-how. Resultantly, they successfully achieve their aim in distinct stages of their lives. In addition to this, in higher education students are not spoon fed, they have to explore their horizons by developing cognitive and innovative thinking on their own which leads to an exponential rise in their success.
In my profound and sagacious opinion, the role of teacher is inevitable in success of a student as tutors disseminate the knowledge in a clear way. Nonetheless, an expert supervisor can be of no benefit if student has low interest and compassion. It can be rightly said that the efforts of both entities are required to derive favourable outcome.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2565.0 1615.20841683 159% => OK
No of words: 481.0 315.596192385 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33264033264 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10068785155 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 176.041082164 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56340956341 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 807.3 506.74238477 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1610582145 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9047619048 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190598119616 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573785202449 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413862855266 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111525813615 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252473428996 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 159.0 78.4519038076 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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