The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of people’s behaviour, buying and drinking coffee and tea in different Australian cities, which included Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.

Overall, it can be seen that all five Australian cities the percentage of people who went to a cafe for having coffee or tea have the highest number, while people who bought fresh coffee have the least number of another 2 habits in the last 4 weeks.

According to the charts, it is clear that in Melbourne, Hobart, Sydney and Brisbane have the highest people who went to cafe with the figures bring 64%, 63%, 61% and 55% respectively and in Adelaide is the city with having the least people at about 49% who went to cafe in last 4 weeks. However, the people who bought fresh coffee, having the smallest number of all five cities. In Sydney and Melbourne have similar percentage at around 42 to 44%. The remaining cities which included Hobart, Adelaide and Brisbane have an average number less than 40%, having about 38%, 34% and 33% respectively.

Finally, the people who bought instant coffee have a percentage between another 2 behaviours except in Adelaide which more than people bought fresh coffee about 1%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98536585366 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47711716692 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50243902439 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.6300737138 43.030603864 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2857142857 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234313837017 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118282848912 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814248061282 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17561962339 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582423818602 0.0819641961636 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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