Universities should be concerned with educating people so that they have wide general knowledge and be able to consider important matters from an informed viewpoint, and not simply prepare students for jobs required by society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The higher-level education which is university in particular, should take it in account with the way they educate students. Hence, they have wide information about what is going on and to provide the ability to matter the necessity from their own views. It is also no to prepare only for the careers which is in need by community. I strongly agree with this because it is important for a person to be able to understand the world and choose his further plan for future himself.
The globalization has been playing key role in human society nowadays. It is important for each human being to understand the change of the world clearly and to treat others properly. University and others are known as not only educator, but fosterer as well. Several researched had been conducted on whether people were enlightened together with educated in educational institute. They suggest that in a school where teachers do foster student gratitude is more likely to have their student results on aspects toward the world better than the one without. Consequently, it is an essence for student to have general knowledge widely and also be able to consider right or wrong toward this changing world.
Additionally, educational institute is a place where people attend to figure out their interest and intension, therefore, it should be concerned with all lecture occurring. In university, each applicant applies to the faculty and expect to obtain necessary feature for their future world. For example, a student who enrolled in medical school wanted to receive essential knowledge and to have some practical experience in this field of study. She pursued her further education in this path because she had dreamed to be a doctor, even though the society need at that time was an engineer. This is why the university should not simply prepare her for jobs required from the country.
In conclusion, then, as I agreed earlier in this essay, the plausible and possible way to educate people have to be concerned by universities to ensure that students are able to live in this changing world with wide knowledge in general and to be able to matter things properly. Students also should be able to pursue their further career and education themselves, not only to serve the need of public.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...essity from their own views. It is also no to prepare only for the careers which i...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...nown as not only educator, but fosterer as well. Several researched had been condu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in general, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00787401575 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68814330947 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514435695538 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6001221248 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.235294118 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4117647059 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443890570581 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130001626571 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086735709467 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282758279916 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395095011677 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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