The graph shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France Russia and America between 2000 and 2015

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The graph shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia, and America between 2000 and 2015

The line graph illustrates the number of Vietnamese students who studied in Russia, France, and America from 2000 to 2015.
It is clear that the figure for Vietnamese students learning in the US and France increased significantly while Russia saw a gradual drop in the number of Vietnamese learners over the period.
In 2000, the number of Vietnamese people learning in France was highest about 3.5 million students, compared to about 3 million students in Russia and nearly 1.5 million students in the US. The number of Vietnamese students in France and Russia went down dramatically to about 1 million students, while the figure for learners studying in America grew about 2 million students.
The number of Vietnamese learners who studied in America rose significantly about 5 million students in 2005, the figure for France remained stable over the period, but it grew up to nearly 2 million students in 2015. There was to hit the lowest point of nearly 1500 million learners studying in Russia in 2010; however, the figure grew slowly to 2.5 million in 2015

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, while, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98876404494 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62190475559 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438202247191 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.3457422237 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393066202346 0.215688989381 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.259335121384 0.103423049105 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120133147272 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307179087898 0.15604864568 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11464865372 0.0819641961636 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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