The tabular give information about sales of firetrade lablled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

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The tabular give information about sales of firetrade- lablled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

The tabular charts depict information about sales of two things fairtade - labelled coffee and bananas in comparison of 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Overall, the most striking fact emerged from the table chart, Switzerland was maximum sailing of coffee in 1999, while Sweden had sold lowest in same years. Sailing of Bananas, Switzerland was maximum and Belgium was minimal. In 2004 sailing of both things were increasing.
To begin with, sailing of coffee in 1999 and 2004 such as 1.5 and 2 million of euros, while in same year Switzerland was almost double in between 4 years from 3to 6 millions of euros. However, Denmark was sailing 1 million of euros and 1.7 in years of 1999 and 2004. The lowest sold coffee by Sweden 0.8 and 0.1 million of euros. finally, just 0.7 millions of euros was increasing in Belgium from 1 to 1.7 million of Euros.

According to the charts, sailing of Bananas, it was more than coffee in these all countries. Switzerland had been sailing 15 millions of euros bananas, next 5 years more than three times like 47 million of euros. Additionally, Sweden and Denmark sold 1.8 and 2 millions of euros Bananas in 1999, also selling of bananas were declined just 1 and 0.9 in 2004. Lastly,the UK sold bananas 1 million of euros in same year and next 5 years was more than 5 times like 55.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... Belgium was minimal. In 2004 sailing of both things were increasing. To begin w...
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...egin with, sailing of coffee in 1999 and 2004 such as 1.5 and 2 million of euros...
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...ith, sailing of coffee in 1999 and 2004 such as 1.5 and 2 million of euros, whil...
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...most double in between 4 years from 3to 6 millions of euros. However, Denmark was sailing 1 ...
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...s of euros. However, Denmark was sailing 1 million of euros and 1.7 in years of...
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... Denmark was sailing 1 million of euros and 1.7 in years of 1999 and 2004. The ...
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...ng 1 million of euros and 1.7 in years of 1999 and 2004. The lowest sold coffee...
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...n of Euros. According to the charts, sailing of Bananas, it was more than cof...
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...9, also selling of bananas were declined just 1 and 0.9 in 2004. Lastly,the UK so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, lastly, so, while, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67659574468 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46149243084 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446808510638 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.604954299 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5833333333 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182426043898 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879355009857 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121613713752 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173091146852 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16894174648 0.0819641961636 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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