The argument over whether learning at home or at school is better for children
has not been settled yet. Whereas home education offers better protection with
individual learning and opportunities for families to bond, schools have a superior
range of material and human resources. Ultimately, I think the school experience is
best for children.
There are several advantages for children who learn at home. Firstly, they can
spend more time with their parents and siblings. Many social problems are associated
with families not spending enough quality time together. Teaching children at home
also provides them with an individualised learning environment. Instruction is
custom-designed and moves at the child’s own pace and in accordance with his or her
individual learning style. Finally, home schooling protects children from bullies and
others who might be a bad influence.
On the other hand, the school environment also offers advantages for children.
Schools encourage children to socialise with their peers and learn how to cope with
gossip, bullying and peer pressure. In addition, children will receive better tuition
across a range of disciplines, as schools have teachers who are trained in special
subjects. What is more, schools provide better access to physical resources such as
sports equipment, musical instruments and library books.
I believe that children are better off in a school environment. Although family
time and individual learning are important, the range of expertise and resources that
schools offer cannot be matched in the home. School environments may present
difficult social situations, but so too does the real world and children must learn to
navigate these on their own.
- The advocates of international aid believe that counties have a moral obligation to help each other while the opponents consider it unnecessary because money is misspent by the government that receive it Discuss both views and give your opinion 75
- One of your penfriends wants to improve his her English in advance of moving to Sydney Write a letter to your penfriend Advice him her about the following Listening skills speaking skills and vocabulary 73
- In some countries criminal trials are shown on television for the public Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 67
- Marketing and promotion is the key to successful business To what extent do you agree 56
- Some parents are worried about the increasing level of violence in TV video games and other types of entertainment for children s leisure How does this affect children How do you think the problem can be tackled 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, so, whereas, i think, in addition, such as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62641509434 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84029892279 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3445098283 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304629826925 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129983072615 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102125798565 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887389972602 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081882993097 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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