Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The argument assumes that since the declining of the deer populations coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.There can be other reasons behind the declination.More specific evidence is required to evaluate the argument.
First of all, it can be possible the plants on which the deer feed on, are declining because of weather changing or global warming. Because of lack of food the number of deer can decline.This fact should be taken in account before reaching any conclusion.
Secondly, it is possible the deers are struggling to adapt in changed environment caused by global warming. They are getting sick easily and thus becoming prone to various diseases which is causing their number of declination.The health of the deers should be examined to have a clear view of this problem.
Thirdly, the deers habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. As the ice are melting in some of the places, their habitat is getting more limited.The scarcity of habitat areas can seriously harm the number of deers.
Fourthly, it can be possible the number of predators in Canada's arctic regions has increased suddenly which is causing the declination in deers number.
If these evidences can be proven to be true, the argument will be seriously weakened.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...igration patterns across the frozen sea.There can be other reasons behind the declina...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 349, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: More
...be other reasons behind the declination.More specific evidence is required to evalua...
^^^^
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of weather changing or global warming. Because of lack of food the number of deer can ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... of food the number of deer can decline.This fact should be taken in account before ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 227, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... is causing their number of declination.The health of the deers should be examined ...
^^^
Line 6, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to have a clear view of this problem. Thirdly, the deers habitat is limited to...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'deers'' or 'deer's'?
Suggestion: deers'; deer's
...view of this problem. Thirdly, the deers habitat is limited to areas warm enough...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 127, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ich they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea sepa...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 261, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...avel over it. As the ice are melting in some of the places, their habitat is getting more l...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 319, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
..., their habitat is getting more limited.The scarcity of habitat areas can seriously...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, at least, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 55.5748502994 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 2260.96107784 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 270.0 441.139720559 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00740740741 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.56307096286 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62904531849 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 204.123752495 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544444444444 0.468620217663 116% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 705.55239521 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.8473053892 131% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.2461816266 57.8364921388 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.222222222 119.503703932 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 23.324526521 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 5.70786347227 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221133233269 0.218282227539 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099224073395 0.0743258471296 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112063982073 0.0701772020484 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112667875964 0.128457276422 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110250681644 0.0628817314937 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.3799401198 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.32208582834 111% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 98.500998004 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.1389221557 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 299, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...igration patterns across the frozen sea.There can be other reasons behind the declina...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 349, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: More
...be other reasons behind the declination.More specific evidence is required to evalua...
^^^^
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of weather changing or global warming. Because of lack of food the number of deer can ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... of food the number of deer can decline.This fact should be taken in account before ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 227, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... is causing their number of declination.The health of the deers should be examined ...
^^^
Line 6, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to have a clear view of this problem. Thirdly, the deers habitat is limited to...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 14, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'deers'' or 'deer's'?
Suggestion: deers'; deer's
...view of this problem. Thirdly, the deers habitat is limited to areas warm enough...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 127, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ich they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea sepa...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 261, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...avel over it. As the ice are melting in some of the places, their habitat is getting more l...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 319, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
..., their habitat is getting more limited.The scarcity of habitat areas can seriously...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, at least, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 55.5748502994 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 2260.96107784 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 270.0 441.139720559 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00740740741 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.56307096286 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62904531849 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 204.123752495 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544444444444 0.468620217663 116% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 705.55239521 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.8473053892 131% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.2461816266 57.8364921388 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.222222222 119.503703932 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 23.324526521 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.55555555556 5.70786347227 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221133233269 0.218282227539 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099224073395 0.0743258471296 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112063982073 0.0701772020484 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112667875964 0.128457276422 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110250681644 0.0628817314937 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.3799401198 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.197005988 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.32208582834 111% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 98.500998004 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.1389221557 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.