The diagram shows in 7 steps how the environmental issues are raised by a product starting from its planning and design and culminating in its disposal or recycling.
As mentioned, the first step consists in the planning and design of a product, like for example a car.
Then material and energy resources are consumed in several industries in order to arrive to their production, like it is possible to see from the third step.
Once the products are complete, they are packed and distributed in various shops that will sell them to the costumers.
The costumers in fact use the various products until they finish and the possibilities become at the end 2: there is the disposal of the product or it is recycled.
Independently from both these cases the use and consume of the products will give a continuous feedback to the various and different industries that will be willing to continue their production.
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The diagram shows in 7 steps how the environmental issues are raised
The diagram shows in 7 steps on how the environmental issues are raised
The costumers in fact use the various products until they finish
Description: 'they' refers to what? products or costumers
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