People don't read newspapers or watch Television news but they rely on internet for news.Is it positive or negative development?
Gone are the days when newspaper and television were only source of knowledge and news.This notion has undergone the sea changes.Ever since the technology took place.In this epoch peoples adhere on internet news rather than newspaper or television. There are several causative reason behind this menace. This essay shall elucidates the reason along with effect in ensuing segments .
First and foremost,reason why the masses more attract on internet news that owing to this, they can save their money as well as time.To be more precise, it is a more convenient method whereas the people have no need to spend money to purchase hard copy of newspaper and to pay heavy bills of cable channel.For example,on website, people can read and watch any news any time on different approachable platform such as facebook,instagram,youtube etc.Thus, they feel more convenient as well as it is a cheapest way to get in touch with the news.In addition, it also helpful to reduce wastage which produce from hard copy of newspaper.By this i mean,they save the thousands of tree which are using to publish newspaper.Hence,This is better way to maintain ecosystem and the reduce the waste material in the society .
However, Senior citizen always like to get in touch with new by newspaper reading and television such as they have surplus amount of time to do the same.Not only this, they also unfamiliar with new technology used so they felt more comfortable with traditional source to receive news but also their actualy enjoy to read newspaper and watch television as they are use to the method.Nevertheless,aged masses are going to decline so very soon this generation may be a abolished those are rely on television and newspaper.Moreover,It might be affect the companies those are running business on newspaper.if they adopt new technology method then they can do their business continue.
To recapitulate,it is vehemently voch that although, liability on traditional newspaper and television might be beneficial for senior citizen yet Internet has more advanced method.It has various benefit like wise save money,time,and trees which proof it is a positive development for the holistic growth of the nation .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, whereas, for example, i mean, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25568181818 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34120607032 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548295454545 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 287.28368674 49.4020404114 582% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 308.333333333 106.682146367 289% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.6666666667 20.7667163134 283% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.1666666667 7.06120827912 356% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324562221306 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132138773169 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962497415242 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183302991654 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214793471136 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.7 13.0946893788 250% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.15 50.2224549098 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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