Some people feel that history is of little use, others feel that history is important as it will help us in the present. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that the study of history is of little benefit whereas others believe that studying history helps us to know the present. This essay, however, does not agree to the former view because our freedom has its roots buried deep in our history.
At first, it seems plausible that a few think that there isn’t much gains to knowing about past of our world which constantly races against a single very popular phrase amongst current generation i.e. “What’s Next”. With the advent of millennials constantly on their heels on route to achieve their dreams of being the top newsmaker in media either by wealth or success, History really does not seem to be included in their repertoire. Can Mahatma Gandhi teach coding or data analysis? That is a tricky question to any Historian.
However, on a deeper contemplation, History has more to it than one believes. For instance, Mahatma Gandhi following his own principles has brought an entire nation to fight for our country against all odds with perseverance and true grit of character at the cost of being shot down by his own fellow man. History is a more neutral record of all the facts belonging to bygone days with true consequences depicting a cause and effect relationship of human morale and its progress over centuries to our present modern society.
To summarise, there is simply no denial that we owe much of our comfortable lives to the brave deeds of past leaders along with a cautious note of their faults as a lesson never to be repeated making us wiser with every read.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...sible that a few think that there isn’t much gains to knowing about past of our worl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, really, so, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84269662921 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52200404949 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647940074906 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.7525592776 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.3 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143256490886 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594944360106 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10356057297 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940608401841 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101521355308 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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