With the development of social media more and more, youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with their problems?.
Improvement of public network has led the juveniles to converse and encounter their Friends without any supervision which has the possibility to end in threatening situations. It can be solved by reduced usage of social media thereby concentrating more on self development and also by keeping themselves occupied.
The increased negative impact of the digital networking has made the innocent juveniles as it’s victims.. Furthermore, the unsupervised access has ended up with increasing amount of cyber crimes and the relationship with the stranger has also increased thereby ending in threatening situations. The uncontrollable urge to use the public network has resulted in addiction towards the social media where all the data are corrupted and privacy is not maintained. This challenging problems may sometimes destroy the life of young adults by entrusting the strangers. For instance, the information uploaded by young girls are being used by criminals to decieve and threaten their life.
To deal with these issues, parents should be given proper awareness and should spend some quality time with their children ,so there will be emotional sharing .By doing so , the usage of these social networks can be reduced and confidence level can be increased for youngsters followed by self development instead of wasting time online. Making themselves occupied by physical activities can also help them to reduce the usage to certain extend. Moreover, laws should be made strictly in order to avoid cyber crimes and ensure data security. For example, if the laws are strictly made and data’s are maintained confidential, there will be the less chance for cyber crimes to occur.
To conclude, although these problems can be reduced by government by enacting laws, it is the responsibility of every individuals to be cautious about uploading or sharing data to strangers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38095238095 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92877040144 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.786699676 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.833333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246373814484 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745759970298 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703097983876 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138866109275 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468473250635 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.