Governments should spend more money on medical research and less on researching the environment.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is argued that national
authorities should invest more amount of money on medical science rather than contributing to
environmental research. I agree with the phenomenon of spending the values in
the medical field and reasons for the same are scrutinized below with strong examples.
on the one hand, it is a fact that the majority of human being
nowadays accepted a sedentary lifestyle which is a pure amalgamation of obesity
and junk food. it is an alarm for the government that overusing of such kind of
trend welcoming a bunch of diseases that demand a high level of cure. Therefore
the authority should devote some of its revenue in the field of cardiac science
to save humanity from a heart
attack stage by treating them in advance. for example, recently Britain has invented many emergency robotic
ventilator which can serve more accurately for heavyweight persons.
It is also true that revenue solely depends on the exporting and importing quantities of goods. By researching and evolving some essential cure vaccine gives huge respect to the country itself compared with others by other nations. Besides this, by exporting such vaccines to other needy nations proliferating
the revenue of the country and helps to sustain economical balance. For instance, in recent
pandemic time, the United States of America had already imported the medicine
in a large number from India named "hydrochloroquine" to save their People’s lives that
are affected with coronavirus.
In conclusion, with changing in time it is assured that medical
disease needs depth study and proper vaccine to prevent it. the government
should spend more income on their research than to invest in environmental things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34909090909 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04974948165 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614545454545 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2547644699 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.583333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173626869449 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652169640055 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888178736392 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0460030318107 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717243761146 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.