TALEL ALDABBOOS
TPO 3 Writing
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Independent Writing
104:43
Directions : Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Word Count: 312
The friendship is the beautiful thing in our life, and how to main it is the goal of every on.Some believe that keeping old firends are more benefecial that new one, This assay will discuse why the old friends are more effective on our life than the new one.but that dose not mean the new friends dont have any importance
First, we spent long time with old friend from the childhood to right now so that is enough time to understand each other very well so we can share our knowlege help each other , I remember when I was in the six grade I sight up in the bascket ball team .In that time I met my best friend ,we have the same though and prefer the same hoppy, we play in the same team that built a stronge relationship between us from that time till now we are the best friends .We finished the high school togather and even though we got eccepted in different collage ,we are keeping our friendshipto this moment.
In addition we can trust our old friends more than the new friends furthermore,, the old friends become a amember of my family like my sister ,when I face any problem or difficulity in my life she is the first one I going to ask her for help because I know how much she likes me and always ready to help me and give advise , moreover our families also became friends l. For exmaple my mom and my friend's mom became closly friend went to the gym and shoping togather. thats why I prefer the old friend
In conclusion, due to the longe amazing time which is spent it togather ,in addition to the supportnace between us Iam very aoroud of my bold frient and I hope we stay close to each other all the life
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TALEL ALDABBOOS
TPO 3 Writing
Practice mode Back Continue
Independent Writing
104:43< Time
Directions : Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Word Count: 312
The friendship is the beautiful thing in our life, and how to main it is the goal of every on.Some believe that keeping old firends are more benefecial that new one, This assay will discuse why the old friends are more effective on our life than the new one.but that dose not mean the new friends dont have any importance
First, we spent long time with old friend from the childhood to right now so that is enough time to understand each other very well so we can share our knowlege help each other , I remember when I was in the six grade I sight up in the bascket ball team .In that time I met my best friend ,we have the same though and prefer the same hoppy, we play in the same team that built a stronge relationship between us from that time till now we are the best friends .We finished the high school togather and even though we got eccepted in different collage ,we are keeping our friendshipto this moment.
In addition we can trust our old friends more than the new friends furthermore,, the old friends become a amember of my family like my sister ,when I face any problem or difficulity in my life she is the first one I going to ask her for help because I know how much she likes me and always ready to help me and give advise , moreover our families also became friends l. For exmaple my mom and my friend's mom became closly friend went to the gym and shoping togather. thats why I prefer the old friend
In conclusion, due to the longe amazing time which is spent it togather ,in addition to the supportnace between us Iam very aoroud of my bold frient and I hope we stay close to each other all the life
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TOEFL is a registered trademark of Educational Testing Service (ETS). ZabanExam is not approved or endorsed by ETS.
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Sentence: The friendship is the beautiful thing in our life, and how to main it is the goal of every on.Some believe that keeping old firends are more benefecial that new one, This assay will discuse why the old friends are more effective on our life than the new one.but that dose not mean the new friends dont have any importance
Error: benefecial Suggestion: beneficial
Error: firends Suggestion: friends
Error: dont Suggestion: don
Error: discuse Suggestion: discuss
Error: one.but Suggestion: out
Sentence: First, we spent long time with old friend from the childhood to right now so that is enough time to understand each other very well so we can share our knowlege help each other , I remember when I was in the six grade I sight up in the bascket ball team .In that time I met my best friend ,we have the same though and prefer the same hoppy, we play in the same team that built a stronge relationship between us from that time till now we are the best friends .We finished the high school togather
Error: togather Suggestion: together
Error: stronge Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: bascket Suggestion: basket
Error: hoppy Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: knowlege Suggestion: knowledge
Sentence: and even though we got eccepted in different collage ,we are keeping our friendshipto this moment.
Error: eccepted Suggestion: accepted
Error: collage Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: friendshipto Suggestion: friendship
Sentence: In addition we can trust our old friends more than the new friends furthermore,, the old friends become a amember of my family like my sister ,when I face any problem or difficulity in my life she is the first one I going to ask her for help because I know how much she likes me and always ready to help me and give advise , moreover our families also became friends l. For exmaple my mom and my friend's mom became closly friend went to the gym and shoping togather. thats why I prefer the old friend
Error: togather Suggestion: together
Error: difficulity Suggestion: difficulty
Error: amember Suggestion: member
Error: closly Suggestion: closely
Error: gym Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: shoping Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: exmaple Suggestion: example
Error: mom Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In conclusion, due to the longe amazing time which is spent it togather ,in addition to the supportnace between us Iam very aoroud of my bold frient and I hope we stay close to each other all the life
Error: togather Suggestion: together
Error: supportnace Suggestion: supportable
Error: longe Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: frient Suggestion: friend
Error: aoroud Suggestion: around
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 410 350
No. of Characters: 1784 1500
No. of Different Words: 227 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.5 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.351 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.361 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 107 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 84 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 30.97 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.2 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.262 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.753 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.14 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 9 5