Nowadays, it is thought that it is more convenient for people to possess a house than hire one. In my opinion, this case is positive because of the huge benefits that owning a house can bring.
To start with, some people want to have their own house because when they have it, they will have more responsible with them. Moreover, renting a home is not cheap, especially in cities and they work with steady salaries which is enough to pay for renting. Instead of that, if they want to buy a house, they will have motivation to make a lot of money to purchase house. Although sometimes they are out of budget for a short time, they don't worry to being homeless. Another reason is that you will have your own space and emotional connection to your house.
We cannot deny that owner a home is a big expenses so they will know how to save money. And perhaps they wouldn't spend money on useless things. They will change their lives about everything to achieve goals.
In conclusion, beside some limitation of owning a home, I have to say the positive points do outweigh the negative ones. It is worth to buy a house than renting it
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...re out of budget for a short time, they dont worry to being homeless. Another reason...
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...e. We cannot deny that owner a home is a big expenses so they will know how to save ...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...now how to save money. And perhaps they wouldnt spend money on useless things. They wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45410628019 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28266876183 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6441311028 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.8333333333 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156796441335 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634356125516 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548669357438 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116351856567 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750741327321 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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