Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to
With the development of science and Technology the world is no longer what is used to be. The fast speed of the world’s alterations have been affected people’s lives. These effects comprise some advantages and determines. Todays, People do not look happy and they are not satisfied with their lives, in comparison to previous generations. In my opinion the disadvantages of these effects are more than its merits. In the following I will elaborate more on this issue.
First, the high-speed of life has changed the relationships among people and families. Nowadays, people allocate less time to communicating with others, and it drastically influences the quality of relationships. Since the world’s news and events are changing very rapidly, people following the social Medias and checking their cell phones continuously in order to be up-to-date. Not only do not family’s members consider certain time to spend one another, but also they spend more time on social Medias. Researches shown that, the quality of our relationships has a direct connection with our satisfaction. More quality in our communications would result to more satisfaction in our lives. Thus one of the negative effects of high-speed of life is the coldness of human’s relationship and consequently less satisfaction.
Second, these days, people are obviously busier than past. They spend more time on their work and have limited time to use up for themselves. They do not have any time to do some exercises and enjoy healthy food. For example, employees expend long hours in their offices and eat fast food because they do not have enough time to cooking or free time to walk during the day. As everyone knows doing activates such as walking, riding a bike, and eating healthy food will improve our health and consequently it will lead to happiness and will reduce stress. Therefore, another negative effect of high-speed of life is that people have approached to a machinery lifestyle, and as a result they have been involved in some improper behaviors such as bad eating habits and sedentary lifestyle. Undoubtedly, a daily proper diet and regular exercise are very effective in the health of the soul and body.
In conclusion, regarding the points mentioned above, people have significantly been affected by high-speed of life, and it impacts people’s Health of body as well as Health of soul. People have less paid attention to their health and communications. If people ignore this obvious fact, the negative effects of this high-speed of life on human health and happiness will be enormous.
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- TPO 45 TASK 2 WRITING Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives Use specific reas 73
- TPO 35 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- Tpo 34 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone online games and social networking Web site Use specific reasons and examp 83
- TPO 48 TASK 1 WRITING 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 694, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ult to more satisfaction in our lives. Thus one of the negative effects of high-spe...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve in the health of the soul and body. In conclusion, regarding the points ment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, regarding, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2168.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1619047619 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90624474252 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509523809524 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4061954015 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2608695652 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2608695652 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08695652174 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231071115271 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744400843884 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616629897989 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153171923822 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439056637789 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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