The table illustrates living problems include health service, education and training and air pollution of citizens in 7 different uk cities in 2008.
Overall, it is noticeable that Enviroment is the issue which uk residents paid least attention to, whereas education and Heath service tended to be preferable. Furthermore, New Castle had the lowest percentage of living trouble in air pollution, while Manchester ranked last in the quantity of education and training drawbacks and Glasgow was the only city which offered better healthcare among other places.
As can be seen obviously, the quality of air didn't bother a large number of citizens since it occupied about 15% of the total at most (in Manchester city specifically), compared to the lowest percentage of that in Newcastle, at 5%.
Conversely, education and health service fields stand out in comparison to the previous field. most of the cities had the number of percentage in school service issue higher than it in healthcare, except Glasgow and London. Glasgow was one the the cities which had the a highest quantity of education and training in 2008, at over 50% while the healthcare service of this city ranked last compared to other places, at nearly 50%.
- Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Co2 emissions in between 1967 and 2007 78
- The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each categories from five organisations 73
- The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full time and part time students about its services 56
- Most large companies nowadays operate multi nationally To what extent do multinational companies have responsibility towards local communities in which they operate 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'paid the least'.
Suggestion: paid the least
...iroment is the issue which uk residents paid least attention to, whereas education and Hea...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...n be seen obviously, the quality of air didnt bother a large number of citizens since...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Most
...ut in comparison to the previous field. most of the cities had the number of percent...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ept Glasgow and London. Glasgow was one the the cities which had the a highest quantity...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ept Glasgow and London. Glasgow was one the the cities which had the a highest quantity...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...lasgow was one the the cities which had the a highest quantity of education and train...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ow was one the the cities which had the a highest quantity of education and train...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, furthermore, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76077887561 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.923019943 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.285714286 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121923473574 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624259264489 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266242761229 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797841949716 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264707007616 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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