A growing tree is most significant for the environment. There is a heated argument over the issue that plants should be farmed in the free space of the megacities and villages. However, others think that more residential buildings should be developed in vacant areas. I partially agree with the notion that accommodation capacities should be assembled, and the following paragraph would explain my points along with an opted example.
To commence with, there are various reasons why housing facilities should be developed. First and foremost one is that many individuals get home by developing cottages in the free space near the villages. For example, in India, most of the peoples live under the poverty line and do not have land for making cottages near the megacities these development give a chance to them to buy a dream house. Another one is that without more housing, cities we are unable to grow and develop, which is essential in a world with increasing population. What is more, without enough homes, people can become homeless, which lead to alcoholism and drug, which can be determined for any country.
On the other hand, there are few reasons why a tree should grow near the cities or villages. Firstly, planting tree provides fresh quality of air which make people healthy, as per the report of world health organisation to live long require a natural air quality and pleasant climate, which is provided by Amazon forest. Moreover, the noise level is also reduced by planting a tree which acts as a buffer against the sound so that we have to grow a tree near towns and villages.
To conclude, although I agree that shelter should be constructed near the cities, I think we must plant a tree so the next generation will get a good quality of air, which is essential for living a healthy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 337, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this development' or 'these developments'?
Suggestion: this development; these developments
...for making cottages near the megacities these development give a chance to them to buy a dream ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, for example, i think, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85161290323 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60433481594 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558064516129 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6858771738 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168591784173 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613236757902 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03701354459 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101301836657 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00993464164841 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.