TASK 2: Problems with environmental pollution has become so serious that many countries are trying to solve these problems. What are these problems. Suggest possible solutions for this.
The pollution has become a concern for each and every country. Lot of measures have been taken but these nations but there is much to be done. The major factor responsible for this contamination in the atmospheres is the global warming and the answer to this lies in awareness and implementation of the environment friendly practices.
Global warming is the ongoing rise of the average temperature of the Earth’s climate system and is accountable for climate change. It is caused by the blanket of pollution that traps the heat around the planet. The sources of this pollution are automobiles, factories, homes, power plants that burn fossil fuels like carbon, oil, coal and natural gas. There are many evidences available which clearly shows how these pollutants have damaged the environment. For instance, if one compares the Portage glacier in Alaska in the year 1914 with that of 2004, it is clearly visible that how the glacier has melted down and one sees only water. Hence, global warming has played a very significant role in contaminating the environment.
The remedy to deal with such an issue is to make people aware of the effect of pollution on the environment thereby telling them on the eco-friendly practices that they can implement. To exemplifying the same, it has been observed that lot of organizations have made car-pooling a mandate or ask the staff to make use of the public transport. Three to four people from a same location or way can contribute equally towards pooling. This will also put lesser burden on their pockets. Such a practice will not only help them to do quality discussion while in transit but also minimize the impact of pollution in the air. So, it is imperative that public must be made aware of the pros and cons in the interest of the environment.
To conclude, it will be apt to say that global warming, a major concern for all countries, is a major cause of environment pollution and must be dealt seriously so as to treat this concern effectively. One way to deal with this is implementing the practices which will help us to mitigate its effect on the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...t pollution and must be dealt seriously so as to treat this concern effectively. One way...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, while, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86225895317 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80137522969 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526170798898 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3754807804 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.823529412 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17297253279 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536868285978 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392395390583 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109543855846 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031909959755 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.