Nowadays, there was a popular trends in buying stuff online. In my opinion, I think that the benefits in shopping this way outweigh the demerit.
There could be some disadvantages which will happens if we carry on to this habit. One reason is that your body would become less active as you do not have to go to the places you wanted the stuff such as supermarkets, restaurants, and shopping centers. Instead they would search for their requirement on websites like Amazon and Shoppe instead as it is much more convenient. Another reason is that these people could run out of money if their finance are not managed properly. Although we will get our needs right at our doorstep, the company also include extra fee for travelling to your location.
While there are some bad results, it is outweigh by the amount of advantages it provides. First of all, these online shopping sites will become very useful when there was a very bad weather outside. People do not wanted to go outside to buy their groceries if there were heavy rains or hailstorms. These phenomena cannot be controlled so the best solutions for them is to let someone else carry their burden. Secondly, in some websites, promotion are available, if searched properly could save them significant amount of money which could be invested on something else.
In conclusion, the trending of online shopping had gained more popularity as most people wanted to live their lives conveniently and they would get promotions or discount on their product but the process also come with some problems in people’s activeness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...ets, restaurants, and shopping centers. Instead they would search for their requirement...
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Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...While there are some bad results, it is outweigh by the amount of advantages it provides...
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Line 6, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...clusion, the trending of online shopping had gained more popularity as most peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94007490637 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60298278228 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602996254682 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5252012831 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.461538462 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194164508214 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641107453032 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381990948841 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114107121188 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466918282048 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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