Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some
people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a
country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, most of the authorities think that economic progress is their ultimate goal and they should only focus on this field, while other people hold the contradicting view towards this and opine that other areas of progress should also be equated to the economy. In this essay I shall put forth both sides of an argument.
On the one hand , it is almost inevitable that economy is the lifeblood of any corner. Every large project in any field need a great amount of capital and it is apparent from that economy stands behind the betterment of almost all sectors. It can be a major stimulator which serves as a catalyst for the enhancement of other types of progress via the help of it's own development. Therefore, many people allege that the economy should be on the government's high agenda.
On the other hand, some people believe that the development of other sectors should also be the focal point of authorities' actions. It is beneath to veto the providing an ancillary aid for other felds by just reasoning economic growth. Because it might stoke many problems in the long term such as segregation in terms of fields, destruction of social balance among the members of society and inequality. As a result, this may put great hurdles to the welfare of the public and the boosting of country. So governments should be compatible enough to keep a momentum simultaneously in every field.
In conclusion, I think that authorities should not only be concerned with bolstering up economy, rather they should attempt to provide a balanced progress for every corner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ides of an argument. On the one hand , it is almost inevitable that economy is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89513108614 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70533195873 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569288389513 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3371743409 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.916666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218968666578 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689772088777 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692497272638 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132057579209 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517207627193 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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