Education is a birth right of every human and it's access should not be limited, as a luxury, to only a few wealthy people. I believe education should be made more accessible and partially agree with the view that education, in particular the primary level of education should be free for everyone.
Currently a plethora of schemes which simplify the access to education are already widely available. Measures such as providing education loans with zero rate of interest, introducing fee waiver schemes for the destitute families, scholarship policies for the meritorious students at the school level, government funding to colleges and universities, are being implemented in many countries. For example, the already existing "Bharat Mata" scholarship for the single girl child from socially or economically backward communities is enabling India to progress in the field of education and research. To substantiate further, it has been reported that the number of school drop-outs has reduced from 25 millions in 2003 to 8.1 million in 2009 due to these efforts. Clearly, the policies in place are continuously enhancing the reach of education to all sections of society.
Moreover, it's a natural human tendency that anything which is made free, declines in its value and same can be the case with education as well. Because there is an immense effort which goes into acquiring higher degrees, it is viewed with so a lot of respect, which if otherwise, would not require many students to truly strive for it. Additionally, making higher education free would even lower the motivation level of faculty members, thereby lowering the overall quality of schooling. Consequently, the chances of rise in the failure percentage could rise after the students realize that there is no pressure of paying fees. Hence, reducing fees for schools and colleges to nothing, can be detrimental for the teaching system itself.
To conclude, more policies should be made to make at least the primary education almost free for everyone but higher education should be made more easily accessible and not completely tuition-free for all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, well, at least, for example, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29793510324 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8500552281 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578171091445 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.3757477378 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.153846154 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279207935683 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973375710074 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851462762403 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19739047362 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808264462717 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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