Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, the development of technology gives us a surfeit of option. Although many people think that the appearance of the titans of technology can become headache for us while choosing something that is suitable for us, it really benefits our life.
The internet has led to a dramatic in the number of choices that are available for us. First, the social media exposes us to a lot of information on different platforms just on the tip of our finger. Over the past decade, we just approach to information via newspaper but now we are totally able to search for what we want to read in a category before selecting what we really care about. Second, the boom of the internet facilitates the way we contact with others. Now we do not have to spend a lot of work to write a letter, address and stamp envelopes and then waiting for a several days even months to get reply, we can keep in touch with each other by many ways with few time spent.
The miracle development of our globe motivates the education to change significantly. First, school-goers totally have the capacity to approach to the lectures at the school when they are out of school. They are sitting in front of the screen with several teachers and relevant references for each subject while they do not have to go to the mortar and brick school. Second, education comes in variety of packages and become easier to approach. Those who are in rural area totally can pursue a higher a quality of education instead of leaving school because of weather or transportation- related reasons with an internet-enabled computers.
The modern life really improves our quality of living by giving us several options. It is also the main factor to increase the social equality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 587, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'day'?
Suggestion: day
...nvelopes and then waiting for a several days even months to get reply, we can keep i...
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Line 2, column 673, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...touch with each other by many ways with few time spent. The miracle development of our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, then, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73178807947 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69090418048 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559602649007 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2023956036 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.071428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153767293767 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432086606796 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050848694286 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717547458754 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701662840056 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.