Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to better life. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Nowadays economic welfare appears to be one of the most important factors of our life and it mainly depends on people's works and businesses. For this reason,some people prefer to have a high-paid job regardless of its mental sides. However, others think that to have an interesting and enjoyable job is more important than to be paid high salary.
First of all, personal opinions and characters have to be considered in these situations. Some people are more sensitive in moral and mental perspectives of life in any situation and this attitude affect on their job choices. These types of huma...
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this attitude affects on their job choices.
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play an essential role
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some people are tending to be materialistic
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