The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full time and part time students about its services

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The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.

The graphs illustrate how full-time and part-time students were satisfied with the IT support offered and current opening hours of a university library.
Overall, it is noticeable that there were a large quantity of full-time students were very happy with the support from the it groups, while it referring to part-time ones didn't stand the services. Furthermore, there were not a great minority of all students feeling unhappy with recent opening times.
As can be seen obviously, almost the same percentage of full-time and part-time students were quite satisfied with the IT support offered, at 32% and 35% respectively. However, only 20% of part-time pupils were very happy with this services, whereas more than half of the full-time ones found being supported in technology field were supportive. On the other hands, although there were just 13% of full-year students felt unsatisfied with the offer, 45% of part-time studying people disliked it.
In term of library opening hours, the number of people showed their very satisfaction occupied 3/4 of the total students in both full-time and part-time, at 67% and 72%. The majority of the rest of full-time students felt quite happy with the recent hours, except 1% did not feel like it. Similarly, although the quantity of part-time students pretty satisfied with the hours was less than it of full-time ones, at 23% compared to 32%, the minority of these pupils were in the opposite mood, at 5% at last.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
... part-time students were satisfied with the IT support offered and current opening hou...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...rt offered and current opening hours of an university library. Overall, it is not...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...s were very happy with the support from the it groups, while it referring to part-time...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...s, while it referring to part-time ones didnt stand the services. Furthermore, there ...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, similarly, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62730057918 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5375 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.5625452617 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304606406834 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168015899899 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609417234711 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224202862328 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046746651652 0.056905535591 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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