Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about the significance of advertisements nowadays. While advertising is regarded to be too prevalent, I believe that it still plays a critical part in convincing people to purchase goods.
On the one hand, the excess frequency of occurrence of advertisements makes it an ubiquitous thing. That is because advertisements in numerous forms are widespread through social network platforms such as Youtube, Facebook or the media like television. However, after watching a dozen of advertisements, people soon get bored and eventually stop taking notice of them or even consider them as a mere every day routine. More specifically, there is a large number of advertisements which are placed before and in between videos to force viewers to watch; yet many of whom just click “Skip Ad” and continue on.
On the other hand, advertisements can act as a persuasive device to hypnotize people into buying things. In fact, advertisements are the combination between sound, colors and visual effects to bring viewers the most animate and the clearest image of the commodities. Hence, they can incentivize people’s curiosity at a push of the button. For example, advertisements of food which are designed to embrace mouth-watering images of that dish can stimulate them to feel hungry and end up with buying that food. Also, any advertisements with lovely cartoon characters can also be tempting to children who will wheedle their parents to buy products soon. Moreover, one of the prime goals of advertisements is providing customers with essential information about prices, operating principles of products as well as disclaiming distorted rumors which deplete the prestige of the brand. Therefore, there is no doubt about the fact that people have a preference to buy things with more dedicating customer service. Besides, there are about 92 percent of people believing in the introduction of other people, in particular the influential ones like prominent actors, singers, modals and more. As a result, using images of celebrities can also contribute to intensify not only turnover but also the prestige of the company.
In conclusion, advertisements are dominant in nearly all of the social media and not the whole of them can fulfil consumers’demand. While they are thought to be unnecessary, I still lean towards to the opinion that persuading people to buy things is attributed to the appearance of advertisements.
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Suggestion: percents
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22505051085 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583979328165 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0561657494 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.411764706 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7647058824 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6470588235 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24109585116 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815145470693 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051677894431 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151512856989 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313518057389 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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