Advertisements for children should not be allowed.
Today we are facing a new children generation totally integrated to technology. Different from the past, kids are interacting with computers, tablets and smartphones every day. Due to a new way of life, it is an important moment to discuss how advertisements can be helpful or not on their development.
During 80's and 90's, when I was a child, all children have access to cartoons on tv and all the advertisements made some influence at that moment. however, we saw much more interaction between kids and they spent a great part of their time playing outside home, without any technological influence. this kind of behavior helped with physical development and probably avoid problems with human interaction on our generation.
Nowadays, we are experiencing a huge transformation. For any reason, youth spend a great part of their lives in front of a computer or videogame. While they are playing strategical or sports games, they receive thousands of advertisements to buy something that will improve their gamer's skills and, consequently, will make them more competitive. Unfortunately, probably we are producing a dangerous future for them because everything seems to be easy and achievable.
On the other side, we need to understand that we are living the same situation that our parents had in the past. because some of them did not have contact with a tv before they were adults, they could think that the very first generation with some technology might have problems. however, they realized that it did not happen and this is the normal world's process.
To conclude, we have to be carefully with anything that could be over normal. children who spend their whole lives in front a device are not healthy. Otherwise, every decade we figure out transformations on kids' behavior. If we think that we need to avoid any access to computers or smartphones, trying to make our siblings without contact with advertisements, we are against natural human being development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 324.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12037037037 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04055270517 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564814814815 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6985391362 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5882352941 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136469393407 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045312035999 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490064319789 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803384611517 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045992675771 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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