Older people usually think that life used to be better in the past. Do you think they are right or wrong to think like that?
The elderly people believe that life in their times was more prosperous than today. In my opinion, life in the past was not easy because it had various limitations regarding technological barriers and social backwardness in old times.
To commence with, the first and foremost challenge in old times was technological barriers. This leads to difficulty in accessibility and communication among the people. Consequently, the lack of advancement in technology people could not make social relationships easily as compared to today’s scenario, where a public connection can be developed in a short time. For example the internet is an invention of modern times which can assist an individual with an individual from one location to another location in a short period of time through numerous social applications. This technological advancement could make modern time better than the time of our grandparents.
Furthermore, in the older times the social orthodox culture was deep-rooted in the ideology of the people. These old values could not have respect for women rights and restrain the freedom of women. For instance, some social practices were prevalent in old times such as the dowry system, the parada system and no voting rights for women as a result the woman had excluded from the equal status among men.
Overall, I firmly believe that the contemporary era is more prosperous in terms of accessibility and freedom of the women. While these benefits are lagged in the older times due to lack of technology and an equal position of the woman which was deprived by the social evils.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...location to another location in a short period of time through numerous social applications. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20077220077 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93792711807 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53667953668 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3996014986 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0594055356993 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254899184843 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0221205305 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0418142361506 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235694127213 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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