New technologies have changed the way people spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Recently, the change in people’s spare time due to new technologies has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although this trend gives humans some benefits, the drawbacks will be far more significant.
There is a huge advantage of the issue that people do not relax as they did. It is obvious that the development of technologies permits people more opportunities to broaden their minds. For example, humans can watch document films on the Internet which not only helps them unwind but also provides them a ton of useful information about many aspects of life. Moreover, by using social network in spare time, people can expand their social circle, which may help them in both life and work. For instance, if students attend some study group on Facebook, they can find friends with the same ability and interest like them and they can encourage each other to persist with their study as well as support each other with tough questions so they all of them can achieve their goals.
Despite the aforementioned positive impacts of this trend, the disadvantages will easily overshadow them. First, having more convenience entertainments makes people have a tendency to indulge in them in lieu of going out with friends to play sports or do some exercises, which makes many health problems. To illustrate, more and more children are obese due to a lack of physical exercise for a long time. Another drawback is family bonds will be weakened if traditional relaxing ways such as watching televisions with family disappear. In fact, due to the hectic pace of life, the time for family is the only spare time of people so if they substitute other activities for a family gathering, they may create a distance with other family members.
In conclusion, although changing in the way spending free time can give people some certain benefits, the drawbacks of the trend will have many diverse impacts on humans life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...trend will have many diverse impacts on humans life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96904024768 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62666815519 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56346749226 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2061568251 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.461538462 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221202484841 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860750314681 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728216095238 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150724465969 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480740467839 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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