In many parts of the world there are now more multi-generational households, e.g. where grandparents live with parents and children, than in the past. What do you think are the reasons for this?
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In the context of the current, it is becoming quite ubiquitous trend amid the members of communality to dwell in families, involving presence of grandparents in relation to preceding decades. As we know, the significance of grandparents can be easily acknowledged regarding the period of child nurturing. As far as I am concerned, the existence of grandparents within every households can positively influence on both individual and communal life.
Unequivocally, a magnifying number of individuals are initiating to reside in conventional mode of families, consisting of all members of families including grandparents, parents and children. Strikingly, there exists multitude of motives, which led to this inclination since living together with grandparents can generate greater boon on the upbringing of juveniles. It is widely recognized fact that the empirical knowledge given by grandparents can contribute to broaden horizons and enrich knowledge of adolescents albeit the dissensions can be emerged between them.
Granted, more people corroborate that the families with grandparents offer assistance for youngsters to create vivid future on ground that the precious suggestion can always bolster children. It is obvious that there are a huge gap and discordant views between younger and older generation originated as a result of incongruity of technology and traditions. However, this cannot be a barricade providing that the senior denizens show their alacrity to foster and support their grandchildren when they are not adept at building great prospects and fathoming the real meaning of life.
In final analysis, although some people prefer not living with grandparents for some reasons, I accentuate that the grandparents are great supporters and wise decision makers, who are capable of aiding their children. Moreover, valuable recommendation and experiments can be deemed as highly effective opportunities offered by grandparents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'gaps'?
Suggestion: gaps
...en. It is obvious that there are a huge gap and discordant views between younger an...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and fathoming the real meaning of life. In final analysis, although some people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78125 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29060981334 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.237564479 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.363636364 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143552916176 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505992714906 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404342143288 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842080735006 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149966170717 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.54 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.01 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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