Some people think it is acceptable to use the animals in any way for benefits of human beings, while others think it is not justifiable. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
Delta society is the best resource for all things related to animals helping people. Some people believe that benefits of animals for human can be proved. However, others argue this is not allowed with using animals for helping people. In my view, I truthfully consider there are advantages and drawbacks of employing animals.
Since ancient history, people have more likely used the animals for benefits of human beings. They abused the animals for some gambling such as cockfight gambling, horse racing contest and fighting lions to death, while some others employed animals to help people to car...
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- As the number of cars increases more money has to be spent on road systems Some people think the government should pay for this Others however think that the user should cover the costs Discuss both these views and give your opinion 50
- Children can learn more efficiently by watching television. Children should watch television regularly both in school and at home. Do you agree or disagree? 70
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Sentence: To employ animals in helping people works had been replaced by sophisticated machines and had become more legalized instead of useless exploitation since technology globalization era.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to people and works
the observer of animals always remind people
the observers of animals always remind people
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
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