Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
Mister. Scott Davis
Chief Editor
My Name is Carlos Becerra I would like to nominate Mrs. Perez for the community award gala of this year. Mrs. Perez is a well know personality in Scranton. She runs an important animal shelter during the week. And gathers food for the homeless on weekends.
She was born and raise here at scranton, went to college at North Carolina University and graduated with honours. After some time working for a major company she came back to his hometown and realize that she was lucky for everything she had. But her community needs a change and she was going to be an important part of it.
That's why I nominated Mrs. Perez for the "community contibutor award". I feel that she is the right person for everything she does. Expecting nothing in return but a smile. I hope that my letter arrives on time to allow her to be considered.
Kind Regards
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Mister. Scott Davis Chief Editor My Name is Carlos Becerra I would like t...
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Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tant animal shelter during the week. And gathers food for the homeless on weekend...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...going to be an important part of it. Thats why I nominated Mrs. Perez for the &apo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71974522293 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59042322928 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656050955414 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5113729214 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.0 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0769230769 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61538461538 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121435898295 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425845714307 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426408828759 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857915340609 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261417737607 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.