A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- give contact details for when you are away
- give instructions about how to care for your pet
-describe other household duties.
Roberto
Thank you so much for your response to such a rush request from me. I'm sorry I couldn't let you know before that I was going to be required in Baltimore tomorrow. I'll be staying at the Best Crown Hotel on fifth avenue 459, my room number is 1743. Feel free to call me if something comes up.
Please make sure that elysium my dog goes out at least twice a week. He loves the mirador park in cornerstone avenue. I almost forgot to tell you something huge about feeding elysium. I've just bought elysium favorites cookies you just have to put it on his plate, he'll know what to do.
About my beer workshop, just check the tank's temperature and make sure the data logger is turned on, and, if you're on the mood pour yourself a couple of beers from the tap. I was able to finish just yesterday a brand new recipe my friend Josh gave me which is a great dutch beer. This beer is in the keg with the red label on. Please don't bun my house.
Thank you
Carlos
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...esponse to such a rush request from me. Im sorry I couldnt let you know before tha...
^^
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...such a rush request from me. Im sorry I couldnt let you know before that I was going to...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...g to be required in Baltimore tomorrow. Ill be staying at the Best Crown Hotel on f...
^^^
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...u something huge about feeding elysium. Ive just bought elysium favorites cookies y...
^^^
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: HELL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'he'll'?
Suggestion: he'll
...s you just have to put it on his plate, hell know what to do. About my beer works...
^^^^
Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tanks'' or 'tank's'?
Suggestion: tanks'; tank's
... About my beer workshop, just check the tanks temperature and make sure the data logg...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 110, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...e the data logger is turned on, and, if youre on the mood pour yourself a couple of b...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 335, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n the keg with the red label on. Please dont bun my house. Thank you Carlos
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, at least, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22580645161 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03583913877 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709677419355 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2043651718 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.4615384615 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119925427412 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388775073551 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493360150463 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070771476276 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024915273297 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.