Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?
Nowadays, electronic devices have been an essential part of human’s life. Thorough these years, while some people have thought of them as tools which have made their life easier, others believe these devices have made humans to feel anxious. I myself concur with individuals whom consider them as life easier ones based on some reasons which will be mentioned later.
At first, what strikes me the most about these gadgets which could not be denied by others too, is their availability for most of the individuals. They have had not only expanded access to every subject that have made this planet to look smaller, but also various applications which have been extremely useful for people. Although humans have had fewer face to face meetings, technology has made human-beings to have more connection with people all around the world. As a result, they have felt less lonely and also all the humans have used their diverse utilizations in every situation.
In addition, as like every topic which has had both good and bad points, electronic devices have adverse aspects too. Despite all these negative points, technology devices have been utilized by people in every condition of their life. Such as education in order to not only write essays but also to take learning courses, and in their jobs which has made work projects to be produced easily than before. And also even in their leisure time where they have been watching some movies or entertainment programs. Consequently, people has been more easy-going just because of these gadgets and by using these devices, they could be able to forget whatever life has thrown at them. Furthermore, computers have been successful to melt away people’s stress, too.
In conclusion, human-beings could not live without technological devices anymore. And that is because of the fact which I believe they have made people’s life much easier by their extensive range of topics which could be used by humans in their various conditions.
- The most effective way to solve the current traffic and pollution problems in cities is to encourage people to move from the suburbs or countryside into the city Centre To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change Others however think that change is always a good thing Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime Others however argue that the circumstance of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when declining on the punishment D 67
- linear process 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, so, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10091743119 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51715582937 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535168195719 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1178333931 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.2 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312207205697 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119698434478 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817143581441 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214220974408 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560061845964 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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