Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives, so it is a waste of time to read news in the newspaper and watch news programs on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that it is a waste of time to read the news which they think is irrelevant to what is happening to our own life. I totally disagree.
On the one hand, when people think that news is unrelated to their life, they tend to think about international and entertaining news. For them, most reports on international emergencies and events that they read about are pointless as they are happening outside of their local community. Also, news coverage of celebrities on TV or the newspaper is purely entertaining and is meaningless to those who show no interest in entertainment. Thus, reading the news seems to be purposeless.
However, they seem to be much biased, as any piece of news can be remarkably helpful in our lives. For example, the news about celebrities could be valuable for the fans resorting to the news media to stay informed about who and what they are interested in. The second example that could be compelling to prove the importance of reading news is the information about the outbreak of coronavirus in Italy. If we-know-who had not ignored this state of emergency declared officially via the mass media and blindly visited the affected area and returned home without an honest health declaration as instructed on the news, they might not have been quarantined and been a factor to spread the disease. Otherwise, those concerned and informed could take corresponding actions to stay safe right away and keep their community safe.
In conclusion, it seems to be not a good idea to think that there is no interrelation between the news and our lives. Therefore, I do not agree that reading news is a time-wasting activity and I think that people should read the news to be up-to-date.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87414965986 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87070195339 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8964588316 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341166896596 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141386089474 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123485393648 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26479433489 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095747668451 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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